Hi there, I payed $3 for the latest version of the game, I want to buy the storybook. I am wondering since I already bought the game do i have to pay the full price to get the storybook or do I only need to pay the extra amount. If I only have to pay the extra bit where would I go to add onto my previous purchase? thanks!
The last version of the game and Storybook are separate titles.
So it's separate purchase with full amount of price.
And as i post in reply below - Storybook was created for our high tier subscribers (20$ and higher) - for thouse players who want give us more support... It's our way to say thanks for our high tier subs.
It have way more less content than original game - just to be clear, don't be dissapointed.
0.4-P1 - it's the last update for main game (included all previous versions content) projectATMOSPHERE with a lot of content (22 game days).
Storybook - it's standalone additional content storybook (with three separate story events - which not included to the main game). Storybook was created for our high tier subscribers - for thouse players who want some more content with projectATMOSPHERE charracters...
Thank you for answering and clearing my confusion. I look forward to playing the full content. The artwork is fantastic and worth the price, just wanted to know the difference before paying so I didn't miss anything. Keep up the good work.
Question: I'm playing V0.4-P1 on PC and now im on Day 20 but the Missions/Task keep repeating at Yui's house. Did I do somethign wrong, is it a bug, or is this the furthest I can play right now?
Btw: Cool game, good lookin', Story is neat, its fun
Yeap we have plans for Steam release but we want to make it as complete story. For now we don't want to slice our game for seasons and sell it separatly.
We know about proofreaders - and work on it(if you want to join fell free to DM me at Discord), but the game are big.
For release schedule - just to be clear, we are working on the game everyday (this is only one job for Dr.Mad and he do it for living without dayoffs and holiydays) our release schedule are make updates as soon as possible.
The original plan was to release 0.4-P2 in two months (November) after the previous update (which came out in September) - but sometimes life has other plans. We had a very tough period - the GPU burned out, problems with the payment system and so on... here we are (Febuary) update is almost ready but it still in development - it took more than 5 month and this is not good. But we learn this lessons and hope we will do it better next update.
P.S. In terms of how we would like to see the release schedule - it will be two to three months per update.
Hey buddy, this game is just awesome, I can't wait to update to the latest version. oh and in a few scenes with Monica I was called Dan, although I called myself Nils, oh yes and I need the full version :) good job
New version is almost ready... we all need to wait a little to play a new update.
Dan is default name for MC, can you please be more specific when Monica call you like that. If you have a savegame of this moment - it will be perfect to fix it.
bruh, this game is fine aside from the mountain of grammatical errors and goddamn susan, is there really NO WAY to avoid her?, also what does the allow cheats option even do?
1. We are working with proofread team to fix grammatical errors.
2. Susan - yeap we know that not all players are into her and sadly for now fist event with her are not avoidoble - we will fix this in future updates, its in our backlog.
3. "Cheats" check box are enable a something like "Harem" mode, but it's sill under development (thats why we hide it without explanation what is it) - game was originally made for straight playthrough with one girl as your love interest. But we know many players in VN genre love Harem roots, for thouse players we made it. This thing are switch off cross route choices for girls and allow players to see all content. Every update we are work on it(it's not just off cross lines - it have special dialogs lines made special for this mode), but we recommend use it for second playthrough.
Ok, I have played at least a hundred different VN's from Itch, and this game surprised me. I don't easily get hooked on a story and this game just floored me with how well it was written. The animations and characters are absolutely flawless. The story is riveting and involving. This just made my top 3 favorite VN list. Superb work. I rarely pay money to support devs on here. (not due to choice but rather necessity as my financial status is not the greatest) but I will be either subbing to your patreon or at the very least paying per episode release here on itch. (Still undecided)
I know that english is not your primary language, and some of the english translations were a little rough, but not enough to drive me away or ruin my interest in the story.
My only (possible) complaints are as follows
[1:] In the early chapters of the game, there's very little face time with a few of the girls. (Amy, Betty and Maya) A few pick up later, but it seems out of the blue due to the length of time without them having any screen time.
[2:] in the chapter 2-3 transition several of the scenes seem kindof forced, as they had no real plot builup for them, they were just shoehorned in. Not enough to ruin my enjoyment, but enough to make me scratch my head a bit,
[3:] I was never interested in pursuing a relationship with Monica, and never made any choices to pursue one. However I did choose to kiss her on the cheek when she was upset about something. I saw it as more of a friendly, comforting gesture and not a romantic one, however due to that ONE choice out of several I could have made, but did not. I was railroaded into a relationship with her in chapter 3, which gave zero option to stop pursuing her. I have no desire to pursue her, but I was already several hours into the story and didn't want to start from scratch. This might be something to take into consideration for future releases. To either give a civil way to break it off for those of us that did choose the "kiss on cheek" option, but saw it as a comforting gesture and not a romantic one, or better illustrate the actual repercussions of that action when the choice is available.
other than those 3 issues, I absolutely love it so far. I did have a question though.
Is it going to have Harem options? or will pursuing multiple women end with a "bad" ending? I can see a few not being okay with harem. Mainly Yui, cause she's hella jealous lol. But With Betty/Phoebe/Amy and possibly even Alice, I could see them being okay with a Harem.
Just curious is all.
Sorry for writing you a book, and thank you again for this awesome work.
Thanks for your kind review. We are really glad that our game can touch your heart.
The better way to support our team is crowdfunding platforms (Patreon or SubscribeStar) because there we make a special subscribers focus votes and your vote can change fate of you beloved character or next turn for game plot. Here on itch.io we cant make thouse votes because it something different platform.
But we are thankful for every support we can get.
Even words can make us joy and feel that we do something good. Thanks again.
Yeap sadly English are not our main language but our team grow and we have a couple guys in team which are native speakers and them work on game script to make it smoother. Current script have more that 100k word so it's long way to make it all. We are working on it.
Btw if someone native speakers is still interesting to help our game grown we are still open for proofread team. Only thing you need is free time and passion for our game.
As far your complain points:
1) Yes, you are correct - it was made for reason Amy, Betty and Maya are side girls and they not meant to be a main stars. But we know they have many fans - so you can wait them in our next updates.
2) Sorry but i need more details. Which transition was forced.
3) Thanks for this i think its our gap for Monica plot we will look on it.
The game was originally made for straight playthrough with one girl as your love interest. But we know many players in VN genre love Harem roots, for thouse players we have special check box in Preference menu - called "Cheats". This thing are switch off cross route choices for girls and allow players to see all content. Every update we are work on it, but we recommend use it for second playthrough.
Well, I bought the latest version, and it won't launch on Mac like other similar apps from here do. Neither the newest version nor the one before that. Both simply say "The application “projectATMOSPHERE.app” can’t be opened."
I'm using the latest M2 OS. Has anyone else gotten it to launch on Mac?
Thanks. The script fixed permissions. Apparently, the archiver used to upload this doesn't handle permissions well. Thanks for the fix. It helps with other apps as well.
Here's on itch.oi you can buy a current (last update) version - the new updates are released like separate titles and you need to buy it again (like next episode of movie or Netflix seasons).
We are indie developers and create our game by crowdfounding model.
If you wanna support the game and us(developers) than you should look to our Patreon or SubscribeStar sibscriptions(our patreons are get a new updates for subscription).
Would it be possible to upload the game so we can download it from itch rather than third party website? Game looks great judging by the pictures and description.
Sadly it’s itchy restriction they can’t store files more than 1 GB size. We can’t nothing with that, but we are working on rebuild our website - hope soon we can store our game at our dedicated ftp servers via website hosting.
For now If you are purchase a game and you have problems with download speed please DM at Discord and i can give you alternative links for Google or MEGA.
Sorry, I'm not using a Mac. My download is the WIN/LIN version. I changed the permission through properties for the startup file, so now I get the "Run as a program" option, but it didn't fix the problem.
Sorry, my Discord account is screwed-up and I can't get anyone to fix it. For some reason I can't verify my account when trying to make the connection. It's been broken for some time. I've made request but it hasn't done any good.
We have plans for German version. But for now doesn't have resources for this kind of work. If you are willing to do a German translate please DM me in our Discord server so we can discuss how we can do it together.
Originally game development for one love interest. But not all players would love this way to play - for those players we have a special mode which we call a cheat mode (you can switch it in the preference menu). That mode disables cross lines paths for girls so you can see all scenes.
Hey, I downloaded the free mac version of the game, but sadly my mac says that the program can't be opened. Any idea what I can do to solve this problem?
I'd like to preface this by saying I am enjoying the game but there are some issues I thought I'd bring up.
I'm going to assume that the dialogs are translated from another language into English or not written by a native English speaker. The renders may be beautiful but the dialog in many cases is unintelligible. Grammar and spelling are also constantly an issue, so the scenes don't flow together so the dialog makes sense.
I would say put this out to the community to find someone fluent in translating from whatever is the originating language to English, someone who understands dialog and discourse, so the conversations flow together and make sense.
Simple things such as when Lily exits the shower and says "Shower is Free" sounds like a bad Russian 1980's accent. "The shower's free" sounds more natural and more expressive, especially for a Cyborg who claims that she still has her human emotions.
Some examples of what could be corrected:
Stan: "He left her right on the road... Bastard... I hope she's all right..."
The term is alright not all right, similar to when people misinterpret "alot" when it should be "a lot".
Stan: "The captain of the ship is speaking... The next stop is... you could not like it!"
Could be written "This is your captain speaking... Next stop, Pain Central, if you don't cooperate." - No (!) needed because the guy is out cold in the trunk and can't hear you.
Simple things like that add to the depth of the dialog and character. Like I said this appears to be a direct translation from another language into English.
I like the premise of the game, I just wanted to offer some ways to clean up the dialog and enhance the character's impact on the audience.
Firstly - thanks for honest review, we appreciate it.
We are know that english are rough in our game and have some mistakes. And we are working on it - just before 0.4-P1 was out, we hire a professional translator and a couple guys (English native speakers) from our community are willing to help with proofleading our english texts. They already working on game but it's not a fast process because game have more that thousand pages script.
Smssubs, you summarized my exact thoughts. This is a promising game but it clearly needs some script editing. I am looking forward to future updates with improved translations and more natural dialogue.
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Hi, downloaded the paid version for Mac and I am getting an error when i try to run the app "The Applicaton projectATMOSPHERE" can't be opened.
Hi, Raprx
Please try workarounds rom this topic.
any way to bypass the horribly slow download?
Hi, Frisho
Sorry for late response - if you are still have this issue - DM me in Discord and i give you the link for other file hosting.
https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
hi you intend to add the game on steam?
Hi, Vertt
Yes.
We talk about in in our previous dev status.
When I attempt to open 0.3-Part 4 for Mac after download, it just says "This download cannot be opened." Thoughts?
Hi, Gilligan49
Please DM me at Discord, we will fix it.
https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
Hi there, I payed $3 for the latest version of the game, I want to buy the storybook. I am wondering since I already bought the game do i have to pay the full price to get the storybook or do I only need to pay the extra amount. If I only have to pay the extra bit where would I go to add onto my previous purchase? thanks!
Hi, flarez26
The last version of the game and Storybook are separate titles.
So it's separate purchase with full amount of price.
And as i post in reply below - Storybook was created for our high tier subscribers (20$ and higher) - for thouse players who want give us more support... It's our way to say thanks for our high tier subs.
It have way more less content than original game - just to be clear, don't be dissapointed.
Definitely going to pick this up, just need to know what the difference between pA 0.4-P1 and pA Storybook is. Thank you.
Hi, ArcherMourn
Let me help you:
Here's release notes for both games with numbers.
Thank you for answering and clearing my confusion. I look forward to playing the full content. The artwork is fantastic and worth the price, just wanted to know the difference before paying so I didn't miss anything. Keep up the good work.
Question: I'm playing V0.4-P1 on PC and now im on Day 20 but the Missions/Task keep repeating at Yui's house.
Did I do somethign wrong, is it a bug, or is this the furthest I can play right now?
Btw: Cool game, good lookin', Story is neat, its fun
Hi, thatrandomweeb
Thanks for your kind review.
0.4-P1 have content for 21 days.
In our game was bug with "Yui's coutryhouse" loop - but we fixed it.
You need download last version of the game.
Is this game ever gonna come to Android?
Hi, BigDickChungus
It's already out for Android - current version 0.4-P1 is availible for Android devices.
If you asking for public release, it will happen when new update (almost done) will be released. Stay tuned.
is this game have NTR?
Hello, The World23
No we don't have NTR roots in our game.
hi mate when will this go to steam i plan on buying if it ever does
Hi, lilzeddyy
Yeap we have plans for Steam release but we want to make it as complete story. For now we don't want to slice our game for seasons and sell it separatly.
Stay tuned.
Do you plan on including achievements on the steam release?
Yeap, definitely.
Awsome game , wanna ask what is your update schedule plan like one every 3,4 month or once every 6 months so on if you get what i mean.
Also trust me you are in a dier need of a proof reader
everything else is more or less perfect
Hello, Sam234io
Thanks for kind words.
We know about proofreaders - and work on it(if you want to join fell free to DM me at Discord), but the game are big.
For release schedule - just to be clear, we are working on the game everyday (this is only one job for Dr.Mad and he do it for living without dayoffs and holiydays) our release schedule are make updates as soon as possible.
The original plan was to release 0.4-P2 in two months (November) after the previous update (which came out in September) - but sometimes life has other plans. We had a very tough period - the GPU burned out, problems with the payment system and so on... here we are (Febuary) update is almost ready but it still in development - it took more than 5 month and this is not good. But we learn this lessons and hope we will do it better next update.
P.S. In terms of how we would like to see the release schedule - it will be two to three months per update.
Hey buddy, this game is just awesome, I can't wait to update to the latest version. oh and in a few scenes with Monica I was called Dan, although I called myself Nils, oh yes and I need the full version :) good job
Hi, nils1108
Thanks for your highest review of our work.
New version is almost ready... we all need to wait a little to play a new update.
Dan is default name for MC, can you please be more specific when Monica call you like that. If you have a savegame of this moment - it will be perfect to fix it.
Will this version also be available here on itch.io? Oh no unfortunately have no save from this scene, but like to play this again from the beginning.
Best regards
Yeap, be sure - we will release new update here on itch.io
Ok, thanks - if you will hit this scence with Monica please make separate savegame and send it to us.
bruh, this game is fine aside from the mountain of grammatical errors and goddamn susan, is there really NO WAY to avoid her?, also what does the allow cheats option even do?
Hello, Bigdickbandit5690
Thanks for your review.
1. We are working with proofread team to fix grammatical errors.
2. Susan - yeap we know that not all players are into her and sadly for now fist event with her are not avoidoble - we will fix this in future updates, its in our backlog.
3. "Cheats" check box are enable a something like "Harem" mode, but it's sill under development (thats why we hide it without explanation what is it) - game was originally made for straight playthrough with one girl as your love interest. But we know many players in VN genre love Harem roots, for thouse players we made it. This thing are switch off cross route choices for girls and allow players to see all content. Every update we are work on it(it's not just off cross lines - it have special dialogs lines made special for this mode), but we recommend use it for second playthrough.
how many GBs is the pc version
Hi, DigitalUser_Of_Itch.io
current PC version 5,3 GB size - the next release will be a little more then 6 GB.
thank you
Is there an free android version or demo? I'm interested in the game but I'd like to check out at least a demo before paying for it
Hi, AgentXero
Soon(when we release a new update) the current android version (0.4-P1) will be released for free download.
Sounds good, thx!
I'm currently playing this one. Story is good animation is top class. Except for a few grammatical problems and wrong spellings the game is top class
Hello, BeTa_23
Thanks for your kind words.
We are working with proofread team to fix this things.
Looking forward to the next update. Excited 😖
Ok, I have played at least a hundred different VN's from Itch, and this game surprised me. I don't easily get hooked on a story and this game just floored me with how well it was written. The animations and characters are absolutely flawless. The story is riveting and involving. This just made my top 3 favorite VN list. Superb work. I rarely pay money to support devs on here. (not due to choice but rather necessity as my financial status is not the greatest) but I will be either subbing to your patreon or at the very least paying per episode release here on itch. (Still undecided)
I know that english is not your primary language, and some of the english translations were a little rough, but not enough to drive me away or ruin my interest in the story.
My only (possible) complaints are as follows
[1:] In the early chapters of the game, there's very little face time with a few of the girls. (Amy, Betty and Maya) A few pick up later, but it seems out of the blue due to the length of time without them having any screen time.
[2:] in the chapter 2-3 transition several of the scenes seem kindof forced, as they had no real plot builup for them, they were just shoehorned in. Not enough to ruin my enjoyment, but enough to make me scratch my head a bit,
[3:] I was never interested in pursuing a relationship with Monica, and never made any choices to pursue one. However I did choose to kiss her on the cheek when she was upset about something. I saw it as more of a friendly, comforting gesture and not a romantic one, however due to that ONE choice out of several I could have made, but did not. I was railroaded into a relationship with her in chapter 3, which gave zero option to stop pursuing her. I have no desire to pursue her, but I was already several hours into the story and didn't want to start from scratch. This might be something to take into consideration for future releases. To either give a civil way to break it off for those of us that did choose the "kiss on cheek" option, but saw it as a comforting gesture and not a romantic one, or better illustrate the actual repercussions of that action when the choice is available.
other than those 3 issues, I absolutely love it so far. I did have a question though.
Is it going to have Harem options? or will pursuing multiple women end with a "bad" ending? I can see a few not being okay with harem. Mainly Yui, cause she's hella jealous lol. But With Betty/Phoebe/Amy and possibly even Alice, I could see them being okay with a Harem.
Just curious is all.
Sorry for writing you a book, and thank you again for this awesome work.
Hi, Bluhdwulf
Thanks for your kind review. We are really glad that our game can touch your heart.
The better way to support our team is crowdfunding platforms (Patreon or SubscribeStar) because there we make a special subscribers focus votes and your vote can change fate of you beloved character or next turn for game plot. Here on itch.io we cant make thouse votes because it something different platform.
But we are thankful for every support we can get.
Even words can make us joy and feel that we do something good. Thanks again.
Yeap sadly English are not our main language but our team grow and we have a couple guys in team which are native speakers and them work on game script to make it smoother. Current script have more that 100k word so it's long way to make it all. We are working on it.
Btw if someone native speakers is still interesting to help our game grown we are still open for proofread team. Only thing you need is free time and passion for our game.
As far your complain points:
1) Yes, you are correct - it was made for reason Amy, Betty and Maya are side girls and they not meant to be a main stars. But we know they have many fans - so you can wait them in our next updates.
2) Sorry but i need more details. Which transition was forced.
3) Thanks for this i think its our gap for Monica plot we will look on it.
The game was originally made for straight playthrough with one girl as your love interest. But we know many players in VN genre love Harem roots, for thouse players we have special check box in Preference menu - called "Cheats". This thing are switch off cross route choices for girls and allow players to see all content. Every update we are work on it, but we recommend use it for second playthrough.
can you make this android Version free i want play it pls
Hi, Master2425
Soon we will release a new update - when it happens current android port will be released for free download.
any rough idea when that may be? Like are we talking a week, weeks, month, months?
Weeks. This month.
thanks for the reply! Can't wait to try it out.
Please make this compatible with the Itch app, its the only thing keeping me from playing this again
Hi, ExpungedUser
Yeap, we have it in our backlog. Stay tuned.
Well, I bought the latest version, and it won't launch on Mac like other similar apps from here do. Neither the newest version nor the one before that. Both simply say "The application “projectATMOSPHERE.app” can’t be opened."
I'm using the latest M2 OS. Has anyone else gotten it to launch on Mac?
Hi, Saineolai
Please try workarounds from this topic.
Thanks. The script fixed permissions. Apparently, the archiver used to upload this doesn't handle permissions well. Thanks for the fix. It helps with other apps as well.
Your welcome. Wish you a happy time with our game :)
Is everything post 0.4 paid or will later updates become free as the new updates roll out?
Hi, BlackKid
Here's on itch.oi you can buy a current (last update) version - the new updates are released like separate titles and you need to buy it again (like next episode of movie or Netflix seasons).
We are indie developers and create our game by crowdfounding model.
If you wanna support the game and us(developers) than you should look to our Patreon or SubscribeStar sibscriptions(our patreons are get a new updates for subscription).
Thanks for the quick replay; I'll probably wait for the finished title. Good luck!
Dev can u make the game downloadable in the app itch io?
Hi, Xdiamondmaster
Thanks for advice, we wil look into this itch.io app.
Hi dev do you have plans for pregnancy??
Hi, BlackWolf1904
Yes, we have plans for pregnancy roots for some girls (but not for all - if it have sense in story perspective or girls characters).
Nice, another question is lesbian content avoidable?? (I'm not into that)
Yes, totally avoidable.
Will there ever be a Android version on released to the public for free
Hi, FlamingFinn
Yes, we will release current (0.4-P1) Android version for free when we release a new update (0.4-P2).
Will the storybook be released for android? The game is great btw
Thanks!
Yes, we have plans for storybook release for android.
When we release a new update for it we will make android release.
What's the difference between ATMOSPHERE STORYBOOK and ATMOSPHERE 0.4-P1? I'm not sure which one to buy.
Hi, Joshvee
0.4-P1 the last update of the game (including all previous updates of the game) driven by story of the game.
While STORYBOOK are something like DLC content for original game (0.4-P1) with additional separate story's that not included in the game.
So i think the better will be buy the game (0.4-P1) and then you can buy a Storybook (if you like the game and you want more).
Would it be possible to upload the game so we can download it from itch rather than third party website? Game looks great judging by the pictures and description.
Hello, justletmeplay1
Sadly it’s itchy restriction they can’t store files more than 1 GB size. We can’t nothing with that, but we are working on rebuild our website - hope soon we can store our game at our dedicated ftp servers via website hosting.
For now If you are purchase a game and you have problems with download speed please DM at Discord and i can give you alternative links for Google or MEGA.
Invite link for Discord:
https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
I purchased the 0.4-P1 for Linux, but the "Run as program" file isn't working. I had no issues with the previous version.
Hi, AndyWho
It's because permisson settings, please try this workaround - it works.
Sorry, I'm not using a Mac. My download is the WIN/LIN version. I changed the permission through properties for the startup file, so now I get the "Run as a program" option, but it didn't fix the problem.
Oh... i got it- then you need send me a details of error.
The best way to do it DM me by Discord
Invite link for Discord:
https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
Again. Sorry for that.
Sorry, my Discord account is screwed-up and I can't get anyone to fix it. For some reason I can't verify my account when trying to make the connection. It's been broken for some time. I've made request but it hasn't done any good.
It doesn't show an error, it just doesn't start.
Please try workarounds from this topic
Discord says "Unable to accept invite".
Wow, thats strange - just check it. Works fine. Maybee you already accept the invite?
Please try this, link:
https://discord.gg/ApEWgmF2
There is h scenes with asian girls? :)
Hi, ShuangShuangPan
Yes, we have a LEWD content with asian girls - one of our lead charracter name Yui is asian girl. You should look the game :)
what about a german version?
Is there a place where I can read about what I need to translate it into German (which files, which software, ...)?
Then even my wife would like to play it, even if these types of games are more tailored to male players...
Hi, EmEiBee
We have plans for German version. But for now doesn't have resources for this kind of work. If you are willing to do a German translate please DM me in our Discord server so we can discuss how we can do it together.
Invite link for Discord:
https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
Is it possible to build a harem or is it just one love interest per playthrough ?
Hello, TheFrenchie7
Originally game development for one love interest. But not all players would love this way to play - for those players we have a special mode which we call a cheat mode (you can switch it in the preference menu). That mode disables cross lines paths for girls so you can see all scenes.
NTR?
Hi, GHOULISHFIEND5
No, we don't have any NTR roots in the game.
that's good was worried for a second that there would be
We are listen our players and most of them are denied NTR.
Don't warry and enjoy our game :)
Hey, I downloaded the free mac version of the game, but sadly my mac says that the program can't be opened. Any idea what I can do to solve this problem?
Yeap - please try this workarounds.
what phone do y'all use??
Different :D i try it on S8+ - works fine.
Awesome job.👍🏻👍🏻
The story is so wonderful without question.👍🏻👍🏻
I'd like to preface this by saying I am enjoying the game but there are some issues I thought I'd bring up.
I'm going to assume that the dialogs are translated from another language into English or not written by a native English speaker. The renders may be beautiful but the dialog in many cases is unintelligible. Grammar and spelling are also constantly an issue, so the scenes don't flow together so the dialog makes sense.
I would say put this out to the community to find someone fluent in translating from whatever is the originating language to English, someone who understands dialog and discourse, so the conversations flow together and make sense.
Simple things such as when Lily exits the shower and says "Shower is Free" sounds like a bad Russian 1980's accent. "The shower's free" sounds more natural and more expressive, especially for a Cyborg who claims that she still has her human emotions.
Some examples of what could be corrected:
Stan: "He left her right on the road... Bastard... I hope she's all right..."
The term is alright not all right, similar to when people misinterpret "alot" when it should be "a lot".
Stan: "The captain of the ship is speaking... The next stop is... you could not like it!"
Could be written "This is your captain speaking... Next stop, Pain Central, if you don't cooperate." - No (!) needed because the guy is out cold in the trunk and can't hear you.
Simple things like that add to the depth of the dialog and character. Like I said this appears to be a direct translation from another language into English.
I like the premise of the game, I just wanted to offer some ways to clean up the dialog and enhance the character's impact on the audience.
Hello, smsssubs.
Firstly - thanks for honest review, we appreciate it.
We are know that english are rough in our game and have some mistakes. And we are working on it - just before 0.4-P1 was out, we hire a professional translator and a couple guys (English native speakers) from our community are willing to help with proofleading our english texts. They already working on game but it's not a fast process because game have more that thousand pages script.
And if you have a time and passion to help our game please DM me @ Discord. https://discord.com/invite/6JF9HEN
Smssubs, you summarized my exact thoughts. This is a promising game but it clearly needs some script editing. I am looking forward to future updates with improved translations and more natural dialogue.
when will next version be released
Hi Sam234io
We are working hard without weekend and dayoffs but update are grown fast and all points that release will be next month.
when are ya able to open the shop are